Blog 12: Peers “Lets Talk About Art” Project

One of the presentations that really caught my eye and got to me was Olivia Gagne’s project. Olivia’s project really tugged on my emotions and made me feel very sad for what she and her friend goes through on a daily basis. Olivia talked about how much the Boston’s Children Hospital really does to make the patients there feel as comfortable as possible with the conditions that they have. I know how good the Boston’s Children Hospital is because I used to go there once a year because I used to have scoliosis. As I got older, I eventually grew out of it. Olivia’s story about one of her good friends fighting cancer was really touching and I love how the hospital is doing all it can to make the pain seem diminished even for a little bit. Art plays a huge roll in making this happen. The amazing artwork shown by the pictures in Olivia’s project distracts the patients with severe conditions and makes them stop thinking about their condition for at least a short period of time. Artwork in my mind is a type of spiritual healing and this form of healing is very underutilized in this society. I believe that art heals the mind by bringing the patients happiness and to have that in a hospital, is really amazing.

Blog 11: Repetition

The photos above are a few examples of what I did throughout my whole essay. I underlined all transitions, key terms and any repetition that was in my paper. I did not notice any big problematic patterns in my writing. What I did notice though is that I used many transitions in my essay, as well as key terms and repetition of words. I believe that repeating words and having good transitions make my paper flow much better and also makes my paper easier to read. This exercise has made me realize what I can use in my essays to make them that much better. It also showed me what I can do in the future to make my writing better. When going over my paper, I realized that several of my paragraphs were very long. Maybe I can find a way to shorten them up a little bit so that they don’t seem to run on.

Blog 10: The Future of Science… Is Art?

Jonah Lehrer’s main argument in his article, “The Future of Science… Is Art?” is that science needs to start incorporating art into science in order to move forward in science. Scientists are very reluctant to the fact that they might need art in order to further their own research because the two shouldn’t in fact go together hand in hand. Science is based off of facts through scientific research and experiments. However, art is based off of emotion and feelings where the artist is trying to express something. This article has several examples of science incorporated into art which made those pieces huge successes. Lehrer is now trying to say that this process needs to be reversed so that scientists can make more discoveries and explanations of why things are the way they are. The only real example of art being incorporated into science was used by Niels Bohr when he was furthering his research in a new electron model.

Heisenberg Uncertainty Principle: The position and the velocity of an object cannot both be measured at the exact same time.

“The Bridging Principle”: Making connections through two different and separate things. This would explain the feeling of consciousness through the brain cells.

Reductionism: The practice of analyzing and describing a complex phenomenon in terms that are held to represent a simpler or more fundamental level.

Synapse: A junction between two nerve cells, consisting of a minute gab across which impulses pass by diffusion of a neurotransmitter.

Epiphenomenon: A secondary effect or byproduct that arises from but does not casually influence a process.

Holistic Perspective: Interested in engaging and developing the individual person as a whole.

Metaphor: A figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.

Palpable: Intense as to seem most tangible.

Lepidopterist: A person who studies butterflies or moths.

The scientist I chose to write about is Niels Bohr because he was relatively the first scientist to incorporate art into science which was a huge success for himself and furthering his career. Niels Bohr was an award winning physicist and humanitarian whose research on the atomic model helped shaped research across the world. Niels Bohr plays a huge role in Lehrer’s article because without Niels Bohr introducing art into the science community, Lehrer would not have an argument at all and this paper would never exist.

The artist I chose to write about is Brian Greene. Brian Greene is a theoretical physicist, mathematician, and string theorist. Lehrer mentions Greene in his essay to show that scientists are slowly acknowledging the importance that art can have on science. Greene explains how art can be used to cause new ways of looking at science and new ways to accomplish there experiments by different techniques to answer the scientific question.

Blog 9: “Necessary Edges: Arts, Empathy, and Education” By Yo Yo Ma

  1. The immediate context of this essay is when and where the essay is first published and includes the author’s biography. “Necessary Edges: Arts, Empathy, and Education” was written by Yo Yo Ma is a professional songwriter who graduated from Juilliard School and Harvard University. This essay was originally published in Switzerland in January of 2014. It was published by the World-Post which is an online news site. What stood out to me in his biography was that he received several awards of achievement for his amazing songs which he produced over 90 albums.
  2. The imposed context of this essay is the reason why I read this text and what my personal experiences were while reading this text. To me, I feel like I read this text today not only to complete the assignment at hand, but also to learn how education and schooling have changed. I do agree with Ma on how schools need to be teaching more than just the STEM educational model and more of the STEAM educational model. I feel that the STEAM model can help broaden the knowledge of individuals which would help you in any profession that one is headed towards.
  3. The internal context is the “so what?” of the essay and what primarily is the author trying to tell you and have you understand. Yo Yo Ma is trying to tell his audience that the educational system is only giving its students the bare necessities of education including your subjects like math, science, english, and history. The main point that he is trying to reach the readers about is that art is very important for a child to possess knowledge of as he or she grows older. Ma thinks that the educational system now is wrong in the fact that students just need the primary subjects without giving art the respect that it needs.
  4. Magnate-a wealthy and influential person in business.
  5. Virtuosos-a person highly skilled in music or other artistic pursuits.
  6. Nonpartisan-not biased or partisan, especially toward any particular political group.