I really enjoyed reading others introduction paragraphs because it gave me insight on how to critique my own writing. It gave me ideas about what I can do to make my introduction better. I peer reviewed Anthony’s introduction and it gave me insight on what I need to do better in my own introduction for the essay to come. I really liked how he brought both of the texts available in his introduction. I thought it was a good idea to introduce both texts and there views. It will help the reader understand what I am going to be arguing for and what texts I am going to use to support my claims.

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